Wednesday, March 30, 2011

Revisions, Revisions, Revisions

          I was pleasantly surprised with my conference with my English class.  I thought that my paper was going to be ripped to shreds and feared that I was not on the right path for the given assignment.  The hints I was given to revise my paper made sense and I am going about it by watching my scene from Shrek the Third again.  Having my teacher’s words in the back on my mind, I continue to rewrite my thesis statement to make it fit with the paper.  Overall I hope that the revising of my paper will meet my teacher’s standards.

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